I am a Year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson and Mrs Fisi'iahi.
Wednesday 18 December 2019
Activity 2: One Small Step for Man
This week for summer learning journey the activity im doing is the rhymes or raps or song but i called my one space rhymes if you want to hear my rhymes you will see it at the top.
Hi Jay-Lee this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
Well done on posting your task. I really like your poem and how it rhymes, its really creative. Do you like poems yourself? Have you ever wondered what its like to be on the moon?
Hi Jaylee This blog post was great. Your poem has a lot of rhymes but it doesn't make sense. I don't imagine fleas can crawl up you in space...But it was really creative. Blog you later! ~ Florence
Hi Jay-Lee this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
ReplyDeleteHi Jaylee,
ReplyDeleteWell done on posting your task. I really like your poem and how it rhymes, its really creative. Do you like poems yourself? Have you ever wondered what its like to be on the moon?
Great Job!
Hi Jaylee
ReplyDeleteThis blog post was great. Your poem has a lot of rhymes but it doesn't make sense. I don't imagine fleas can crawl up you in space...But it was really creative.
Blog you later!
~ Florence